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The Rodent Revolution




A bit of preamble here: This was my entry for the National Poetry Competition 2009. Obviously I didn’t win anything, otherwise I wouldn’t be allowed to share this here. But the competitions loss is someone’s gain…or something else equally consolatory :) Anyway, here it is – I hope you find it enjoyable in some way. I quite enjoyed writing somethign a little bit different.

It was gloaming when I woke.
Scattered about the lawn were the beaten night-owls,
trading places with the prey which, triumphant,
hid among the garage creeper.
Dense leaves betrayed the presence of the mice,
but only by its stillness in two-tone light.
The rodents rejoiced,
and it was the falling feathers I spied next.
Some caught among clothes I’d neglected to collect,
and the washing line was taut,
where before I’d left it limp.
The clever imps.
Jumper-wrestling was suggested
by quill-pierced wool.
And so the plot unfolded.
Bleary-eyed, I viewed
splinters of the owly coats
Still falling through garden air.
Yet must I despair,
or just think these events slightly curious?
Certainly, without backing,
such visions might be spurious.
And as my ears found no inkling of sound through glass panes,
What I was seeing had no support.
…In spite of the washing line
which I hadn’t left taut.
Unsure of action
I lay back down, thinking of owls.
Tripped and fallen in tawny gowns.
But proof arrived, of rodents who contrived,
when the day came.
As through those self-same windows I glanced,
and noticed, hidden among the plants,
Not the now disappeared night-owls.
But the half-camouflaged foxes, come for them.
Pierced upon spiked trowels.



Log In [a poem]


I type my password again.

My account is unavailable I’m told.

Down for unscheduled maintenance.

And just like that, this 21st century life is on hold.


Sad as it seems, this is the only thing I do.

So, though I feign interest in the BBC’s stories.

Re-check my emails, from me, from you.

And consider my guitars, forlorn, unloved.


I smell coffee, a scent of progress,

measuring out the lives for someĀ  writers’ nostrils.

But just passing the time here.

And I guess that perhaps there are five pieces of clothing

In the pile on the floor.


I retype my password again.

I notice the second part of the message then, powerless.

‘It should be available again within a few hours.’

But the mess that my room is in can wait by the door.

Near the jewel cases crest fallen from the stereo.


I debate whether to shred those papers.

Sift them slowly – allowing the developers time to finish -

but decide to shift them below me.

And while I wait, I could check my myspace page.

But it’s just a pretender these days.


My glass of water is empty.

My throat scratchy.

No doubt due to the dust that is all about me.

I could do something about that, I suppose.

But my account might be ready, who knows?


I retype my password again.

And Log in.

I have no new notifications.

No new messages. No updates.

And I like nothing sufficiently to comment.


I log out.